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“Urban Scholars” Joins the Ammo-nymous Plays of West Hollywood

By Alison Minami

This month I had the pleasure of participating in Ammunition Theatre’s Ammo-nymous Plays West Hollywood. My play “Urban Scholars” was one of six thrown into a hat and drawn for an on-the-spot cold reading with very talented company actors. This happened over three nights on the rooftop of the famed West Hollywood Fiesta Cantina, and I had the great fortune of hearing my play aloud for the very first time. The audience experience was delightful and satisfying on so many levels. Firstly, the acting chops of the readers were stellar (Eric Lyons: Matthew Harris; Nia Thao: Tina Huang; Jericho Thompson: Bubba Proctor; Heaven Ford: Tiana Randall Quant Stage Directions: Roxana Ortega). I could not believe how well they were cast and how adeptly they took on their roles having never read the script. The play turned out so much funnier than I had remembered. This was unintentional, and so, a pleasant surprise. But also, the play took me back to a very specific time in my life and dealt with an issue that I have been grappling with intellectually for a long time—charter schools.

My first full-time professional job as an educator was at high school in East Harlem. I’d taught before that in Japan, but that had felt more like a paid study abroad program where I traveled classrooms as a teacher’s aide to facilitate conversational English games. Those ordered, pristine hallways were far different from the ones housed within the New York City Board of Education. I worked at the Urban Peace Academy, which was a euphemism for failing public school, and less than five years after I left, the school permanently shuttered, no doubt at the mercy of changing political winds and the latest performative resolve to overhaul a broken educational system. Whatever the reasons for the closure, my experience there very quickly disabused me of the notion that public school was always the best option for everyone. I went from thinking I would never send my kid to private school to I would never send my kid to this public school. Of course, at the time, I didn’t have any kids, so all of that was just righteous indignation. Having gone to a very reputable public high school, I had been a champion of public education, scoffing at the elitism of any other alternative. Yes, I had studied inequities in education; that was why I was there in the first place. But my doe-eyed naivete about how to impact student learning came up against all the obvious challenges that I’d only read about in collegiate academic settings –ie. poverty, hunger, disability, domestic abuse, racism obviously. Not to mention, all the challenges that I might (and did) face as young, petite, Asian American woman teaching classrooms full of Black and Latinx students who were less than a decade younger than I was, amidst teachers who were twice my age.  I had always been greatly offended by how inner-city schools were portrayed on television and in movies; the depictions were racist, stereotypical, reductive, and over the top. But teaching in an inner-city school, I was loathe to admit that, at least on the surface, much of the chaos and authoritarianism tracked. The disrespect towards students and from them is an endless feedback loop.

The most memorable day of my brief high school teaching career was the day before the Winter holiday, when our school principal was escorted out of the building by Board of Education officials in dark suits. They stood outside her office so as not to allow her access to her computer or anything else. To make matters worse, students had been told there’d be an early dismissal, but our school visitors determined that we had not been authorized to permit an early dismissal. I distinctly remember forcing students to remain in an auditorium where we were showing a completely, inappropriate R-rated film and barring them from exiting when the film ended. At day’s end, all the teaching staff were gathered in a classroom and told that when we returned from our Winter holiday, we would have a new principal. And this was a promise kept; we never again saw or heard from our old school principal. This day was emblematic of many more memories I have of my time there.

It should’ve been a tell when I went in for my interview. The principal did not get up from her desk to greet me, nor did she walk me around the school. Instead, she presented me with a trifold brochure of the school with colored photos of the basketball team and some other clubs. She was most definitely selling harder to me than the other way around, and I, being young, new to New York, and hungry for employment didn’t think twice that she didn’t ask me a single question about myself or my philosophy on teaching as she marveled at my very spare resume.

Anyway, I digress. I’ve always been against charter schools. After teaching in a public school, I understood the moral outrage behind the anti-charter school movement. I learned the talking points—how charter schools siphoned away money from the regular public schools and created greater inequities despite claiming to remedy them; how they were largely unregulated and often discriminatory; how they partnered with large corporations with ulterior motives; how they manipulated their enrollments and results to fulfill their mandates; how they stole the brightest kids from the student populations of traditional public schools. Now many years later, as a parent learning about the strategies to get your child into the best public school, I see the other side of the charter school debate. I can’t tell you how many times I hear parents say, “I don’t want to send my kid to a charter school, but I have no other option.” I know it reeks of class and privilege, but I can’t say I entirely blame them.

To further drive a wedge in the debate is the common practice of charters co-locating with larger, traditional public schools. Co-location is when a small school is housed within as larger multi-story school buildings owned by the district. For example, Urban Peace Academy was a small school, housed on a single floor of a three-story public school building. While my school was not a charter school, we experienced much of the tension between school communities forced to share key spaces; such as, the auditorium, the cafeteria, the gymnasium, etc.

“Urban Scholars” is a play that aims to explore the complexities of the charter school debate through the relationship between two warring principals, Ms. Thao and Mr. Lyons as they are forced in a co-location agreement by the district. Further, the play addresses the micro-aggressions of race, gender, and age in the workplace, and the ways in which authority and power are constantly mediated between colleagues, teachers, and students. In the end, amidst all the educational politicking, it is the students who suffer. That sounds so cliché that it’s easy to forget what that could look like, and I hope this play offers a glimpse.

Some interesting links on charters and co-location:

https://www.hks.harvard.edu/faculty-research/policy-topics/education-training-labor/weighing-charter-school-debate

https://www.bkreader.com/policy-government/tensions-rise-in-brooklyns-sunset-park-over-charter-school-plans-10871626

https://www.latimes.com/california/story/2025-07-25/court-strikes-down-l-a-unified-policy-to-keep-charter-schools-off-campuses

Staged Readings

There’s nothing like hearing your words read before an audience.

I’ve had the good fortune to have two readings in two months of my newest play THE LUCKIEST GIRL. (It’s the play that not one, but two artistic directors told me no one will ever produce for political correctness reasons. So, I’m grateful that it’s even getting a reading!)

As much as we playwrights disparage the whole development hell process, it’s so important to have a safe place to help a play grow. And one part of that growth is exposing it to an audience.

Thought I’d share a few notes about what I’m listening for during a reading of one of my plays.

What I’m listening for:

LAUGHS

It’s the ultimate immediate audience feedback. Did they get my jokes? Even my dramas have little laughs sprinkled in. I admit if my chicken jokes in the Bosnian war crimes drama don’t get laughs, I feel like a failure. So the first thing I listen for is laughs from the audience – what jokes are popular? Which ones fall flat? Is there some unintentional laughter about something that seemed perfectly reasonable to me when I wrote it? Could it get a bigger laugh with different phrasing or a different punch line?

REPEATING YOURSELF

My bad playwriting motto is “if it’s good once, write it again elsewhere in the script. Several times.”

The reading is where I FINALLY hear the repetition that somehow doesn’t jump off the page. And it’s an opportunity to look for the places that plot points or character clues NEED to be repeated.

LISTEN TO THE AUDIENCE

My new standard for bad plays is when the audience starts texting. I’ve seen it happen at exactly the point in the script (not mine, of course…) where the action lags, the piece feels like it’s not going anywhere, the audience is bored. The worst example of this was a mediocre production of Jon Jory’s adaptation of “Pride and Prejudice” last year in Florida. Not one, not two, but THREE people in the audience all pulled out cellphones at exactly the same moment – late in the script just as Mr. Darcy was about to propose! Jane Austen was turning over in her grave! Dramatically, that should be the HIGH point of the script. It was not.

No one texted during my readings, but sitting in the back row, I did notice several folks fidgeting. I made note of where they came in the script and will now look to see why interest is lagging at that point.

LOGIC

Do the events of the play follow in a logical order? I discovered that I had inserted a short scene in a place that made no sense whatsoever.

TYPING MISTAKES

There’s nothing like an actor trying to make sense of a line missing a word to catch your attention. A cast is like a room full of proof readers.

STUFF THAT STILL DOESN’T WORK

I have a series of short “interview” scenes where my two young actors do a man on the street interview of actors who play a revolving cast of characters. It was clunky in rehearsal. It was still clunky the first reading. And it never improved in the second reading. I could say “three strikes and you’re out,” but I think I have an idea of how to fix it.

STUFF THAT DOES WORK (or “get your finger off the delete button)

There’s a line that just felt wrong to me. And I’d made a note to myself to change it. And then the audience laughed loudly at the original line. Will I keep it? See rule one.

LISTEN TO YOUR DIRECTOR

Directors are amazing people. They see things in your script you had no idea were there.

My both my DC and LA directors found things in my script I had not fully thought out. Which has helped me flesh out characters and motivations and a style quirk that needs ironing out. I think I took more notes than my actors.

LISTEN TO YOUR ACTORS

Actors bring heart and soul to your words. They generously spill their insides for the sake of your current draft. Pay attention to their instincts. They may see more in your characters than you do. Be aware of the lines that get stuck in their mouth. Usually it means the sentence construction needs a tweak.

White Fluffies and Butterflies…

Butterfly on weed by marilyn958

When you go to script readings, do you comment?  And when and if you comment, do you tell the truth or do you give white fluffies and smile for the imaginary camera?  Are you concerned that the director may find out who you are and put you on a list? 

On the flip side, when it’s your turn to receive comments for a script that you have written, do you want white fluffies or the truth?  How difficult or easy is it for you to see through the fog of fluff?  Does your inner radar sound off?  Do you, as storyteller, know the story you are trying to tell?  Do comments assist or hinder you in your process?

I personally hate white fluffies.  I tend not to give them.  Okay, I don’t give them.  I don’t want anyone giving them to me either; just tell me straight out.  The thing about comments is that it is ultimately up to the writer whether or not they want to incorporate them or not anyway.  But, it’s a lot easier to wade through the information if there are no fluff balls crowding constructive comments.  I think that as fellow artists, if we give a comment it should be an honest one.

I went to see a new play where the playwright participated in a talkback after the production .  The audience did not give white fluffies; they gave something worse, convoluted and somewhat idiotic rants and rails that could never help the playwright.  I hope the playwright was able to let it roll off his back like water on an oiled surface.  So brave, he was, to sit there and take questions, so vulnerable; unsure of the work maybe because it materialized in a radical new way this time, unsure, like a new playwright just trying out craft.  I could feel his butterflies in the room fluttering about…  It made me wonder if the they ever go away – the butterflies — when we send the children out into the world to play… 

Careful, watch out for the fluffies…

*Art by Marilyn MacCrakin, a California playwright and photographer. http://marilyn958.deviantart.com/

Stage Directions

 

I have a good brain for maps. I can navigate well in physical space and especially cities. My sense of direction served me well when I read Joyce’s Ulysses since the movement of the novel is the movement of characters in space. I was able to move around my own mental Dublin with Leopold and Stephen. 

Moving from novel space to stage space, I want to talk about one of my favorite playwriting elements, stage directions. I love stage directions. 

Stage directions describe the stage and the visual world of the play as well as any physicality by the characters. 

My favorite stage directions are at the beginning Beckett’s Krapp’s Last Tape with the banana business. I like bananas in plays. Beckett is fun. 

Recently, I found myself reading stage directions for a variety of play readings. First one friend asked me to jump in and read, then another friend asked, so I had a chain of play readings. I enjoy reading stage directions. I can indulge my inner actress without actually acting. 

Sometimes, I feel like the Stage Manager in Our Town. I set up the stage simply and efficiently, then I let the play play. I try to dress for the play—not in any big costume way—just to fit in with the play’s universe. 

Unlike the other actors in the reading, I am only there for the reading. When the play is produced, I will not be called. My part will disappear. Knowing this gives my work for the reading a simple kind of specialness. I will do it, then it will be over. Onto the next thing. 

I never thought I would find such specialness in a play reading.